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Endless Whiteness by =divBy0:icondivBy0:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Nature > Limerick




I don't endear Father Snow,
though the world is all aglow:
endless whiteness where
green-ness was once there;
where flowers and plants would grow.
©2004-2009 =divBy0
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date written: 29 Nov 2004

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~Hiram-Easton-Saime Nov 30, 2004, 7:43:49 PM
Oh, but how you don't understand. You can't have rebirth without death first. It's not the winter or the summer, it's the very second in which green changes to white... That single instant is what you're aiming to achieve.
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=divBy0 Dec 1, 2004, 5:29:54 AM
why do you think i want rebirth?

besides, if you're born again, does that mean you get two bellybuttons?

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~kneatynx Dec 1, 2004, 7:05:31 AM
"pland"??

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One legend says
its wielder saved the world,
while another says that
he wrought chaos and pain upon it.
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~kneatynx Dec 2, 2004, 9:35:58 AM
yeah thats what i thought you meant but you wanted critiqueness so there you go i gave you critiqueness :nod:

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One legend says
its wielder saved the world,
while another says that
he wrought chaos and pain upon it.
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~matsaada Dec 19, 2004, 1:26:47 AM
Nicely done, short and sweet as the saying goes,take a look at mine if you've got any time.
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