Oh wow, Ace. This is great. The placement of the text is perfect, and all the reflections and stuff... definitely gets your point across.

Since advanced critique is encouraged, I'll go on to say that the only thing that throws the shot off a little is the way it seems to slant upwards (which I know is not something you can really FIX, since that's just the angle you were standing at, looking up), but maybe a little more cropping (along the top, particularly) would be beneficial? I dunno.

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"You do not have to be good.
You do not have to walk on your knees
for a hundred miles through the desert, repenting.
You only have to let the soft animal of your body
love what it loves."

-Mary Oliver, Wild Geese

the perspective can be changed and i agree... i believe "squaring it" would enhance the effect

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Oceans, mountains, deserts and everything in between.

thanks for the critique!

actuall,y there is a way i can try to pull out the tilt, and uit uses a tool i don't use much, so i could probably do with the practice.

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