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When The Gods Stop Burning The wind whipped the few remaining leaves as they strained on their buds and branches. The sky was as dark as a cloudly midsummer's twilight, but you knew those weren't clouds. The smell of ash stung in your mouth and nose.

Above you, that tree, which once held the body of a man, was still stained with his blood, showing deep and black in the darkness. The field before you was long since plowed and replanted and replowed, the furrows long and deep and leeched of nutrients. Across that long field that once waved brilliant golden strands sat a smoking ruin.

As you approach, the ash will sting your eyes and stain your clothes. You will stand t

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Apologies if it's hard to follow. Each section is a dialog between two characters (except for the third part, where there's a dialog between two characters except for the last line).

I don't do many scripts, this is a first in terms of posting.
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This is a work of fiction. If you look up at the top, you'll see that it's posted in the fiction category. Keep that in mind while you read.
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~MWils1 Feb 26, 2010
I find this sad and scary :( but well written.
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=divby0 Feb 26, 2010  Professional Writer
i know. thanks.

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The Orange Butterfly Prince

he hoped toward a great many things,
has a gift that may transcend,
but as to what comes now...
may be his fatal end.
2006 Jul 13

I donate blood. What do you do?
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~Up-in-the-clouds Feb 26, 2010
I like it :)
Are you gonna do another one? You've got me interested... ;)
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=divby0 Feb 26, 2010  Professional Writer
it's also nice to reach out into a category i've never worked before. probably brought in some fresh views from people who haven't seen my art before.

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:orange::butterfly:
The Orange Butterfly Prince

he hoped toward a great many things,
has a gift that may transcend,
but as to what comes now...
may be his fatal end.
2006 Jul 13

I donate blood. What do you do?
Reply
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~Up-in-the-clouds Feb 27, 2010
I think you did great.
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=divby0 Feb 27, 2010  Professional Writer
thanks

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:orange::butterfly:
The Orange Butterfly Prince

he hoped toward a great many things,
has a gift that may transcend,
but as to what comes now...
may be his fatal end.
2006 Jul 13

I donate blood. What do you do?
Reply
:iconup-in-the-clouds:
~Up-in-the-clouds Feb 27, 2010
You're always welcome.
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=divby0 Feb 26, 2010  Professional Writer
don't know yet. we'll see

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:orange::butterfly:
The Orange Butterfly Prince

he hoped toward a great many things,
has a gift that may transcend,
but as to what comes now...
may be his fatal end.
2006 Jul 13

I donate blood. What do you do?
Reply
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